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The First Impression: How to Get Your Novel Noticed with Stronger First Pages

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The First Impression: How to Get Your Novel Noticed with Stronger First PagesYOU'LL LOVE THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR IF: Your are a writer who struggles with beginning your novels You are a writer who ais unsure about how to improve your opening pages You are a writer who wants to strengthen your opening pages Your are a writer with strong ideas, who needs help implementing them ABOUT THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR: The first impression is sometimes your only impression. Before an agent can fall in love with your project as a whole, they

YOU'LL LOVE THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR IF:

  • Your are a writer who struggles with beginning your novels
  • You are a writer who ais unsure about how to improve your opening pages
  • You are a writer who wants to strengthen your opening pages
  • Your are a writer with strong ideas, who needs help implementing them

ABOUT THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR:

The first impression is sometimes your only impression.

Before an agent can fall in love with your project as a whole, they must first fall in love with your submission. Strong opening pages are essential to getting your submission noticed and read by an agent. If an agent isn't hooked by those first few pages, it's unlikely that they'll want to read more. So what makes some submissions successful, while others receive form rejections and never manage to make it out of the slush pile? What prevents agents from wanting to read beyond the first chapter? The first page? The first paragraph? The first sentence?

In this on-demand webinar, instructor and literary agent Annie Hwang (Folio Literary Management) teaches you how to make the first few pages of your manuscript shine. You learn how to craft opening pages that can capture and sustain readers' attention and compel them to keep turning the page. You gain insights as to how agents go through their slush pile and what they look for in the projects they want to pursue. By the end of the presentation, you know how to establish characters readers will care about, how to set the right pace for your story from the very beginning, and how to avoid common pitfalls that can get in the way of your literary ambitions.

WHAT YOU'LL LEARN:

  • What agents look for in the first few pages and why
  • How to present the best first pages of your manuscript to compel an agent to request to see more and continue the conversation
  • How to pique interest and sustain that interest beyond the first line
  • The appropriate length and tone of a first chapter
  • How to decide whether your novel begins in the right place
  • How to set a strong foundation for the rest of your story
  • The importance of showcasing your unique authorial voice
  • Common pitfalls that can bore, tire, irritate, or completely put off readers

INSTRUCTOR:

Originally from Los Angeles, Annie Hwang first worked in journalism before moving to New York to pursue her love of books. Since joining Folio Literary Management she has had the pleasure of working with both debut and seasoned authors alike. Annie specializes in all categories of literary, upmarket, book club, and speculative fiction. She particularly enjoys working on historical novels and psychological thrillers. More than anything, Annie loves working with debut authors who have a gift for storytelling and can immerse her deep within a well-built world in the space of a few sentences. She is especially drawn to braided narratives, layered plots, and characters with deep emotional resonance. Annie also works on nonfiction in the categories of pop science, diet/health/fitness, food, lifestyle, humor, pop culture, and select narrative nonfiction.

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Trouble In FL
West Palm Beach, US
★★★★★ 5
Fantastic writing and non-stop action
Format: Kindle
This is a promising, fantastic beginning to what will be a 4-book series. Some readers may be content to read only the first 2 books, but I think you'll find that the story is so good that you'll want to keep reading books 3 and 4. Book 1 is about omega Elvana's introduction to the "Starling" brothers and their search for another missing person, Kelly. It's a bit of a rocky start, with deception and betrayal a key element. Hardly an auspicious beginning. Each member has their own path and purpose in the pack. Their interactions and the resulting narrative are so well-written that I found it difficult to put down. There is a cliffhanger that will have you reaching for book 2 as you finish, so make sure you have it on hand.
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Reviewed in the United States on September 27, 2023
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rilakk
Phoenix, US
★★★★★ 4
Fun read
Format: Kindle
I'm not really into mafia books but I love Roxy Collin's other series so I decided to give it a try. It had the same great romance, spice, swoon-worthy characters and exciting plot that are her signature. Arben was my favorite, although it was a bit sudden how quickly he changed from ignoring her to wanting to be pack. There were almost too many twists/layers of lies to keep track of but I'm looking forward to reading the other books. The only thing that detracted from the story for me was the need for a bit more proofreading. It was mentioned that Kelly is a female and male at different points, leading me to think she changed her mind at some point about the character's gender but didn't go back and edit it to align in all places. Like another reviewer pointed out, step siblings are different than half siblings. They are incorrectly referred to as step siblings because they (allegedly) share the same biological dad. There are a few other typos as well but those aren't a big deal.
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Reviewed in the United States on March 18, 2025
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Carmen Alicea
Belleville, US
★★★★★ 5
Stepbrothers, Secrets, and Sizzling Heat
Format: Kindle
Twisted Lies by Roxy Collins is a wild ride through family secrets, amnesia, and a steamy stepbrother romance. When Kelly discovers her life is built on lies, she ends up tangled with three alpha stepbrothers and an assassin who once helped her through a heat. The tension? Off the charts! The heat is real, and the complications are messy in the best way. Full of twists, secrets, and fated mates? You'll be hooked from page one! Love omegaverse drama with a dash of taboo? This one's for you!
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Reviewed in the United States on September 10, 2024
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Ashley
Natrona Heights, US
★★★★★ 3
Good read
Format: Kindle
The book has some good twists and turns, but truthfully I was so confused on some things. It didn't have a good flow for me personally. Not sure if it's due to typos or using him/her wrongly, but I thought Kelly was both a guy and a girl. Actually I still don't know, and it made me incredibly frustrated. It would refer to Kelley as him or he, and then again in another part of the story as her she and sister. On to the next book, I hope there is some clarity and a smoother flow. This is a slow burn, and I just don't know how much I care for the Alphas yet. Idk if I recommend.
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Reviewed in the United States on February 8, 2023
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75_SweetestBook
Boise, US
★★★★★ 5
the lies
Format: Kindle
This is amazing fast pace read that is full of plot twists and lies that keep getting bad. This is a story we’re a omega has been lied to by her mother and finds out that someone is slowing dieing. 3 alpha take the omega and feed her more lies so they can use her against her father so they can find their mate Kelly. This is a dark read and ends in a cliffhanger and so good.
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Reviewed in the United States on June 13, 2023

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